Hi Fletcher, I can see that you are beginning to support your arguments with examples. By adding an introduction, you can explain your topic a bit more, so that the readers know what you will be talking about. You can talk about the history of school uniforms and different viewpoints around whether they should be included in school.
Hi Fletcher, Explained your two reasons clearly. Now I know why uniforms can help people if they get lost and how they help people to blend in. That reminds me of how animals use camouflage... is that what you were meaning??
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Hi Fletcher, I can see that you are beginning to support your arguments with examples. By adding an introduction, you can explain your topic a bit more, so that the readers know what you will be talking about. You can talk about the history of school uniforms and different viewpoints around whether they should be included in school.
ReplyDeleteHi Fletcher,
ReplyDeleteExplained your two reasons clearly. Now I know why uniforms can help people if they get lost and how they help people to blend in. That reminds me of how animals use camouflage... is that what you were meaning??