Hi Fletcher! I didn't know that the author of Treasure Island lived in Samoa! I liked that you used rhetorical questions to engage the audience. Since this is an information report, maybe you can use subheadings and third person narrative?
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hi Fletcher! I didn't know that the author of Treasure Island lived in Samoa! I liked that you used rhetorical questions to engage the audience. Since this is an information report, maybe you can use subheadings and third person narrative?
ReplyDelete